Psssst, do you see what I see?
Look closer and you will find
the answers.
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XIX - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 26, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Look Closer
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept seeing word: Book of Secrets- at first I thought it was Book of Shadows but was told noooooo Book of Secrets
Seeing an orb- hearing word: incandescent and reference to relative-
Now being shown a pool and looks like reference to six feet- I am being shown the side of the pool where the number is 6- also strange as it sounds getting word
drown- whether metaphor or symbolism-
After reading Your verse again- I am getting that number 6 again on the side of the pool also word: toddler- Nudged to mention- Friend and reference to eyes in the back of her head
also being shown a garage open and reference to teenagers- watch the tools
being shown a claw... hammer- and what looks like a staple gun-
hearing reference to: an accident waiting to happen-
Hopefully that makes some sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Look closer and you will find...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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