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Love

My head on your shoulder
your lips on my hair,
so small a thing
yet all of my dreams
are gathered there 
safe in your arms.
Nothing much
we want to say,
words would only
wash away the chemistry
and mystery of,
a moment of destiny,
the making of love.

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  • Swan song gold member
    June 29, 2008
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    Very good Well written and nice imagery here


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 23, 2008
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    I like the quirky way this rhymes throughout.


  • albymyheart gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    A short write yet you are placed in one of those special moments in time here. Where the silence speaks the words of a tender embrace. Lovely...alby