Your essence fills my nostrils
Your eyes fill my heart
We know where we are going
This is the time to make it start.
Let me make you quiver
With the silky touch of hands
Then take you on a journey
Where you don’t know where it ends.
Taste this kiss upon my fingers
Feel this heat on my fingertips
Let my fingers go exploring
Let me guide you through this trip.
My soft tresses glide so gently
Across your strong and heaving chest
My fragrance makes you giddy
But you know that it’s the best
My hands tremble in anticipation
Of the manhood you possess
I prolong the needed touch
But continue to caress.
My lips follow a trail well known to me
From your eyelids to your feet
You shiver when I gently avoid
That place of passions heat.
Now it’s time to take that first step
To make you moan and gently sigh
I taste the salty precursor
Of what will be in just a while.
Taking all your offer
I run my tongue around the tip
And feel you grow much harder
And love the gentle grip
You have on my auburn curls
An involuntary movement
You go with instinct at this point
As you crave fulfillment.
Then I set myself upon you
Making the two of us as one
And now I moan with you
And I find that if I turn
I can also use my fingers
Just a bit there to the right
I can bring you closer ever
To our most erotic night.
No need for oils or lotions
The lubricant is there
To glide you to the depths of me
And then it’s more than we can bear.
We hold on to each other
Moving quicker and fervently
Now we have reached the pinnacle
We cum together you and me.
A contest entry
- In The Mood by WingedWolf.
600 points, ended July 13, 2008, 15 entries
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aww i like this. beautifully written for sure. you rhymed easily it seems. not much forced really. as for erotic? oh yeah. good job.
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'No need for oils or lotions
The lubricant is there'
...Oh my...
you're so lustful!
'You have on my auburn curls
An involutary movement'
...oh...how I crave to touch your sweet auburn curls...
You're very very hot, baby!
so extremely lustful, voluptuous, bewitching and so seductive...
I can't resist you, honey!
Kisses all over, my love!
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Very intoxicating indeed. I enjoy the rhythm that builds with the same measured intensity as the experience described. As the first verse notes, we know where this is going and the rest of the poem confirms that the climax will be reached without rushing it.
Note: Is "we" missing from line 3?
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Thanks for the heads up. And thank you for the comment. I get so into the poem that I read it the way I thought it and not whats on the page sometimes.
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WOW! A very erotic and sensuous poem. Makes me dream of wonderful nights and afternoon delights. This how it should be.
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