You've given me inspiration from afar,
come in and warmed my heart,
you intrigue me in so many hues,
my beguiling muse
What once was barren, dusty,
bruised, tired and rusty,
you have burnished clean and new,
my beguiling muse.
You hold me captive to my pen,
releasing all that's held within,
open my eyes to different views,
my beguiling muse.
Entirity I want to share
with you, one so fair,
it's you I openly choose
my beguiling muse.
Please tell me what you think
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This is absolutely beautiful.
Your writing is amazing and this here would win over any muse.
Every single line is truly lovely....lovely indeed.
There is a 'song' feel to this, in my head anyway.
Pretty much every part worthy of making the 'favorite mark' .......but if I HAD to pick, lol....this is my part:
You hold me captive to my pen,
releasing all that's held within,
open my eyes to different views,
my beguiling muse.
Superb writing....breath-taking and beautiful....
Jamie
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