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Essence

The essence of being blind
Is when you search, seek, and find
That everything can still go right
Without your power of sight

The essence of feeling fear
Is when your soul will no longer perservere
And begins to cower
Backwards into the corner

The essence of feeling safe
Is when someone is brave
For no particular reason or rhyme
Giving but a selfless donation of time

The essence of feeling love
Is when you won't budge no matter push or shove
From the one that you hold dear
Each and every day of the year

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option 6: aneternal kiss

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    aww beautifully said, wonderful write and good luck
    thanks for entering and i hope you had fun
    take care
    stephanie

    • Improv Machinery
      June 22, 2008
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      im always finding a way to have fun, and thanks for the comment. i havent written like this in a while, your feedback means a lot.
      Rob