Our lips softly brushed
in sweet vibrations.
Beneath m'silk rushed
a quickening obtaining
spectacular sparkles of
brilliancy from your touch.
M'soul laid back
in soft summer rain,
I caressed heaven.
Author notes
30 words
In a list
A contest entry
- 30 Words Never Sounded So Beautiful. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended July 6, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. You did a fantastic job painting a picture and weaving a sensual tale. Beautiful.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Nice and sensual. great read
Thank you. I enjoyed it.
Riftkin
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Sensual!
In a light erotic way that is romantic and playful.
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30 words of passionate sweet flow!
you sure know how to build the poem with light touches
and vivid emotion...
truly a lovely write indeed.
way to write dear poetess...way to write!
ears/Seattle
I've truly missed reading your poetry...and I never
got to write a dedication for your birthday in
Ephiphanny's former group candlelight and pen.
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Stunning imagery again in this piece. This was short, but you, again, caught the atmsophere of what you were trying to put across, so well. Imagery superb. I like the sensuality of it. Good luck in the contest Novy.
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
xx
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WOW novy..brill write..good luck in the contest..xxx
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Vibrant !
Delicious write of the kiss and all that is felt from this heavenly embrace... You have done very well here with you 30 words. Great Job!
Best of luck in the contest
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Nicely written novy. Sensual. Katie
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