This old world , is torn apart.
It seems smaller every day.
The storms rage higher within my soul.
The edges between the subconscious and,
Waking world are blurred.
“So I say to you “
Enlighten the world are be consumed by it.
Author notes
Just thinking about whats going on in this world today.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt #13 Semi-Quickie by marlene47.
600 points, ended July 1, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Will you please give a smile to someone in need?
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
There are times when it all seems to be torn apart... either by natural disasters or the cruelty of humankind... and that does make feel like its shrinking. All this can wear a weary soul. What you feel inwardly and outwardly is the same. Every person must shed light in his own world or be consumed by it... Awareness helps put the right acts into play.
Thank you for your thought provoking entry.
Marlene -
So true
To wrestle with what was is like trying to see in the dark you dont get too far .But to look about yourself and ask what can I do to make things better then maybe just maybe we can bring the life back
-
very very true! I loved this one!
-
a very deep emotional write. the message here is clear. thank you for sharing this. keep writing! you are talented! God bless you always
-
Very deep and expressional in so few words wonderful write
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
