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Levi

You can't keep it in
It's about to spill out
Another crack in the dam
Hell, we're in trouble now

So you try to scream now
It gets a little harder
You try to run now
Just to go a little farther

And your fears are suffocating
Damn, you can't breath
Your hatred is rising
Such an ominous scene

She falls a little faster
Right to a dead end
You tried to do something
But wound up doing nothing again

So you laugh just little
To find your alone
Yeah, you cry for a while
But you know you're alone

So your hands are tied
You wings weighted down
That crack in the dam
And all the pain that wants out

So you try to yell now
To find you're a mute
Yeah you try to fly now
But your crippled to boot

And it just takes so much
You can't even breathe
You walk a thousand miles
And hell, you're still never free

They lock you up tightly
So you'll never go
Put in a little white room
You now know as home

So you try to escape
To find another hell
You try to get up
Just to realize you never fell

It's so confusing isn't it?
Your burden so heavy
Only for all these emotions
To break through the levi

We're going under now...

Author notes

random...nnneessss...first poem i've written in forever and i seriously apologize if it sucks...which it quite possibly does.

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  • enitsirhC
    June 22, 2008
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    This is really good!

    I love the ending!
    "So you try to escape
    To find another hell
    You try to get up
    Just to realize you never fell

    It's so confusing isn't it?
    Your burden so heavy
    Only for all these emotions
    To break through the levi

    We're going under now..."

    ^^Beautiful!

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