You can't keep it in
It's about to spill out
Another crack in the dam
Hell, we're in trouble now
So you try to scream now
It gets a little harder
You try to run now
Just to go a little farther
And your fears are suffocating
Damn, you can't breath
Your hatred is rising
Such an ominous scene
She falls a little faster
Right to a dead end
You tried to do something
But wound up doing nothing again
So you laugh just little
To find your alone
Yeah, you cry for a while
But you know you're alone
So your hands are tied
You wings weighted down
That crack in the dam
And all the pain that wants out
So you try to yell now
To find you're a mute
Yeah you try to fly now
But your crippled to boot
And it just takes so much
You can't even breathe
You walk a thousand miles
And hell, you're still never free
They lock you up tightly
So you'll never go
Put in a little white room
You now know as home
So you try to escape
To find another hell
You try to get up
Just to realize you never fell
It's so confusing isn't it?
Your burden so heavy
Only for all these emotions
To break through the levi
We're going under now...
Author notes
random...nnneessss...first poem i've written in forever and i seriously apologize if it sucks...which it quite possibly does.
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Comments
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This is really good!
I love the ending!
"So you try to escape
To find another hell
You try to get up
Just to realize you never fell
It's so confusing isn't it?
Your burden so heavy
Only for all these emotions
To break through the levi
We're going under now..."
^^Beautiful!
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