Upon a poets hand
"I see illusions mystery"
of having been moved by their words.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XIX - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 26, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it come from your heart are your Head?
Comments
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Congrats on your HM ~ you have penned a beautiful piece here
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Poets From Within
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept seeing name: Shakespeare - also Albert Einstein but reference to quotes done poetically
For some reason seeing what looks like a fawn- whether symbolism or metaphor-
Also being shown a balloon and like a dart hitting the balloon on the wall- corkboard
Feels as if an underlining message~
Nudged to mention phrase to You: The Day the Earth Stood Still-
Being shown Humphrey Bogart- and also name: Vivian and what sounds like Silva-
After reading Your piece again, I kept seeing a fountain- hearing word: mortar-
but water so pure- drinkable- backyard- built and phrase: pennies from Heaven
Hopefully that makes some sense
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
" I see illusions mystery"
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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aw Mom this is a wonderful 15 words, the smaller contest are definatly a challange to get so much meaning in 15 words, this is wonderful for your first one Good luck in desire's contest she is a beautiful soul and a wonderful person
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