So is this it?
Is this how it will always be?
Doing the same old shit
Daily life is haunting me
Not knowing what to do
Having no where to turn
Living life's lessons
But I never really learn
Nothing ever makes sense
Not to me anyway's
My heart is feeling cold
Yearning for better days
A contest entry
- Depressed. by Nicotine Eyes.
300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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I loved this and u know what I can relate check out my poems lol i know how u feel.Great write in such few words. Also wonderful flow too. keep writing and I will keep reading.
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It is really good.
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Short but it explained alot. My favorite part was when you said "Not knowing what to do
Having no where to turn" thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Nice
This is really awsome! My favorite part was the end "Nothing ever makes sense Not to me anyway's My heart is feeling cold Yearning for better days" this was absolutely amazing! Keep up the good work!^_^
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reminds me of a song; "waiting for time to get better" nice rhyme and flow
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There certainly are days when one feels like this - is this all there is? Will things ever get better? Sentiments well expressed in these lines - good flow, rhythm and rhyme in these verses. Think positive; days do get better. If they were all good, then one would not appreciate them as much as if there are bad ones in between to m ake the better ones stand out.
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wow i feel ur pain in this sound like something bad has happend good write keep it up
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I can really relate to this poem, that makes it much better for entering my contest. I love it all. Thanks and good luck.
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