Can't seem to remember
if swimming in my own shit really stinks.
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25: fish
A contest entry
- summer is for the sky by fishbone.
533 points, ended July 7, 13 entries
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Wow... Now if that doesn't make you think - I wonder what would lol!
Very very interesting lol... I think it would be nappy!
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this is great from the title to the final period-like a thousand words...great!
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Hah! Well, this is really too brief for me to give it a win, but i'll be damned if I can't relate some days.
Thanks for this.
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Too brief.
Quality not quantity.
But I think the stinking did reek
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-just turns you funny shades.
... especially if you've absorb a morsel or two of chemicals from the Cuyahoga River. Add a bit of fire and you've got an interesting broiled treat. yes.
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haha made me chuckle though i really wouldnt suggest swimmingin your own shit...i dont think it is ver healthy lol
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After a while you adapt to anything.
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