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Mother

Unclasp your sheltering hands.

Release me.




It's not always about what you think is best.




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A contest entry

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  • Lila Love
    November 20, 2008

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    Wow...

    I understand this.
    I have the same feelings with my mother sometimes.
    Thank you, for this wonderful piece of art.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 9, 2008

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    Powerful Piece!

    So true, and thanks for sharing you!
    Keep up the good works here, and congrates on the HM.

    Peace, Timothy


  • Desire gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Mother
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown a doberman pincher- barking...
    Nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I read again to be sure I was getting this image correctly-
    for some reason I was getting the image of the little boy from The Omen...the scene where he is wearing the little black cap- what looks like a jacket with piercing eyes also being show what appears to be an antique doll but for some reason it is sideways as if laying on its side- the eyes open and shut~ Hearing reference to Hazel-
    Also word: Mansion- and spooky...After inhaling Your words again- getting phrase: up the hill
    and word: Avoid...
    Okkkkkkkkkkk now I was about to be done here but got an image from Psycho- where *Mother* is supposedly looking through the window- always watching I am being told
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Unclasp your sheltering hands.
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    So True!!!

    You words are so true. Being a mom I try to give advice and hope they listen. I admit, there are times we don't know what is best. Great write. You take care.

    Blessings.
    Sandy
    ;f


  • teenparent
    June 22, 2008

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    Wow

    A very strong write. Sometimes, it's truly not always what they think is best.

    Luke

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