You asked me to talk to you.
I talked.
You asked me to listen.
I listened.
You asked me to love you.
I loved you.
You told me you wanted to leave.
You told me you wanted to die.
You did.
You asked me to wait for you.
I'm still waiting..
Author notes
Author: chrstn
A contest entry
- Depressed. by Nicotine Eyes.
300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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This is well done. Good luck on the contest. Welcome to AP.
Garrison
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aww this is great wonderful work!!
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*whistles*
Wow....this is very powerful. I like the spacing of the lines. It works well with the push and pull feelings you have. WONDERFUL!
Luke -
*sad
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Aw, this was ad =[
But i liked it =]
Nice job.
Goodluck.
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