emotion effuse
between two lights joined as one
fullfill eternal
A contest entry
- Haiku III by Kelli Marie.
2250 points, ended June 27, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah..the connectivity of the two brings the one anwer to the both..wonderful indeed..I love this piece..well done..and my thanks for sharing this beautiful piece with me...
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summing up the wings of the dreams in the poetic peace itself is a wonderful dream lol...well done my friend..
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thank u
thank u for the wonderful comments given to my ku. Saddie23
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Good haiku...I liked this work. Beautiful job!! THANKS!
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thank u
thank u for the wonderful comments given and I like the applaudes as well.
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Very nicely done. I like this one. You did a good job with it. Thank you for entering the contest. Nice take on the picture.
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thank you
thank u again for the warm sentiments given to my ku. Saddie23
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So few words with alot of meaning.
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i love this poem.
it is so strong. in so few words you say so many worthwhile things. i think the first line is so true to me. it made me think so much, i don't really like haiku's much, but really like this one!
keep writing and good luck in the contest,
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thank u
thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my ku. I'm glad u liked those lines. It was worth writing and I hoped it fits the criteria for the contest. Saddie23
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Strength
I love this Haiku and I'm not really into them that much. The first line has been my life for as long as I remember; as I just pour out my emotion. I wear my heart out on my sleeve prouder than anyone in this world. The two lights being me and my ex-love which I still love..and when I'm with her we are definitely eternally fulfilled. Such a beautiful piece; effective as can be. 7.5/10! Wonderful.
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