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Spare Change Purse

She claimed she never had much.
Deprived of TV and transportation.
At times she even admitted -
She was all she had.
Just her and her little
Spare Change Purse.

From place to place she'd collect her change.
You could even see her out in the rain.
Running around trying to fill her little
Spare Change Purse.

High school came and we watched her closely.
Every day coming to school and
filling up her little
Spare change purse.

Until one day came -
Then everyone knew her name.
Her name loudly rang.
Venessa driving her new cute red
sports car -
Freshly bought with her years of
collecting in her little
Spare Change Purse.

Author notes

I collect change too

not enough to buy a car though *tear*

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  • judmc
    June 25, 2008

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    Cute Poem

    quite a novel poem Alex carrying sound advice along
    with it.Take this thrifty advice yourself and maybe one day you'll ride arround in a Cadilac. Nice poem
    Best Wishes and Kind Regards George ++++


  • creationsfromheart
    June 22, 2008

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    HEhe this is cute and uplifting, I have tried to collect spare change however my son seems to devour it before it gets to high in the jar lol, I have now went down to a small little box lol... Very cute write