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Youth

the allude beauty

of timeless light stand to loves

pure death's emotion

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Patpowers silver member
    July 19, 2008
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    Nice work!

    Great piece here Saddie! Your words share some beauty all together. THANKS!

    • saddie23
      July 19, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my ku and the applaudes are most welcome as always. Saddie23


  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    A beautifully poetic write. This reads like one long sentence more than an haiku. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli

    • saddie23
      June 24, 2008
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      thank you

      thank u for commenting on my ku and glad u liked. I hoped it fits the contest rules. Saddie23


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    Superb

    Ah, an intriguing short write, indeed. I like it just as it is. It reminds me of one I wrote called: "Aging Youthfulness". If you care to read it, here's the link:
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2741706

    • saddie23
      June 22, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for commenting on m ku.thank u for the link. Saddie23

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