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Paradox

wandering vessel

point its sea traveler to

guide through rough waters

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    Ah...a great take on the picture. I like where you took this. Thank you for entering the contest. Nice write.
    Kelli

    • saddie23
      June 24, 2008
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      thanks

      thanks for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem.Saddie23


  • Wolfdog silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, just as it is. Also, it reminds me of an old classic poem, I read years ago. Here's a link to a poem by John Masefield:
    http://www.poetseers.org/the_great_poets/misc/i_must_go_down_to_the_sea

    • saddie23
      June 22, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful entiments given to my ku. I read the poem and fell mused by the writer. thank u for the link. Saddie23

      • Wolfdog silver member
        June 22, 2008
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        You are quite welcome. Glad you enjoyed the link.

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