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[ as the sun is. ]


[ as the sun is. ]


you are beautiful, as the sun is;
warmth and radiance spotlighting the
vibrant rebirth of a season full of life -

the world is constructed of you and i
every beauty a reflection of our souls,
captured in the wonderment that a child sees
life as - whole and new, for the taking.

the best times of my life are those when
i am in your arms, possessed and possessing;
there is nothing more real or true than you.

you are beautiful, as the sun is...


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  • wordsmistress21
    June 23, 2008
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    haha..."sun"...u know the connection

    beautiful poem...so sweet

    see you @ prom!


    • goodbye account
      June 23, 2008
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      Yes Angela, I make it a point of always drawing connections between your beauty and my boyfriend.

      Prom ahoy.


  • mspruell
    June 22, 2008
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    aww super cute.