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fiendish thingie

       “Mind, how you go.”

       Poem for National LSD Week

                  Roger McGough

 

 

comrade come and populate my inner world

surf on hubris and sledge through debris

the waking world’s in a whiskey-spin

 

let’s ravish the habitat

where no McTavish is lavish

take literally the littoral abstraction

batter the mad hatters

 

  up

 

    tight outer

 

  site

 

see how they fly like Lucy

spiders and flies apace a-wing

with liquefying carapaces

dripping liquid quicklime

and quicksilver stalactites

 

  over under

 

    Zeit-ways

 

  down

 

tango to a marimba band in the clearing house

of the subconscious mind over matter-clatter

(see the mad hatters come back counter-attack)

pogo with plasticine people and jump-back-jim

in cerise scrim zim zalla bim abraca-do-dah…

 

let the wake bury the wake and the dead men dance!

 

… don’t be L-seven worry about the whiskey-spin L8r

 

 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    lol...well this certainly is a more than one read kind of poem you are amazing, my friend. love, lane


  • Peteskid gold member
    June 24, 2008

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    i think i only got part of this, which is a slightly good thing...I think but it was a trip...PK


  • Amera gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    And when the cracks crawl and all the colours blend into white and the ebb of reason moves into the darkness will we be released to sail upon the waters of the torrential mist of humanity.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Bad Bill
    June 23, 2008

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    I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by....indecipherable poetry! What a mind trip--it's as if a modern-day Joyce was interpreted by Salvador Dali.
    I love it!

    Bill


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 22, 2008
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