A tree was there beside an old house
A hungry Pusy cat was in search of some mouse
She sat on the wall and peeped below
All of a sudden, someone greeted her Hello
It was Peter parrot who perched on tree top
He wondered what made Pusy wander and hop
Pusy narrated her woe; “None bothers mice getting extinct, makes me low”
Peter pranked; “Mice shifted to their ancestral home in the well below”
Pusy at once looked at the well and used her wit
“Neither am I a foolish lion, nor you a smart rabbit
In my childhood, I regularly attended school
So I am not the one who can be fooled”
Peter had no option
But to fly with hung face, to restore lost grace.
Author notes
This poem has come after a long span. Infact it came as holidays home work of a class 10 student in neighborhood. He was provided 5 words by his teacher on which he had to write;house, cat, wall, tree, parrot. Thanks to him that I am back to writing again. Gaining the lost touch. And it marvels me too, how it turned out to be on Education for all Program and how strengthened can a female (cat) be against pranksters with the aid of education. Hope you enjoy it. And special thanks flow to poet Nirmal who was with me in tough times and constantly encouraged me not to forget this art. He is my best critique and I expect same from him ever and after.
Please tell me what you think
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hey i couldnt stop with just one comment.. and after i wrote the review i found the special to Mr. Nirmal kumar.. Well.. he accepts your thanks and thanks you inturn for remembering him :-)
take care sweet one..
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Shivani... This poem is worth a million bucks.. do you know that..
Awesome yaar.. What a flow and what a lovely story in it and what a funny incident to narrate
You have risen to enormous heights in my view.. and this one poem is the sole reason for that..
Really really wonderful.. I do not find the right words to express my feelings. but this is one of your best works..in fact one of the best poems ever written
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I like the flow in this piece! Good job!
I'm finaly back to spend time on AP again, I've had a bit of a problem to find time to write. Hope your good! -
This is the best one I've read it from you so far... brilliantly written.... I loved it..
if you can reduce the length of these two lines to match the meter of the rest of the poem, it will be even better... but it is fine as it is...
Pusy narrated her woe; “None bothers mice getting extinct, makes me low”
Peter pranked; “Mice shifted to their ancestral home in the well below”
mina
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