where is the wonder of a child
who follows the clouds day or night
and imagines an answer to a question unasked
by a quiet little voice inside
who naps while the birds sing in the daytime
who dreams while crickets perform under the moon
whose smile is like sunshine in the middle of the night
whose tears bring in storm clouds at noon
who laughs at ladybugs and turtles
who studies walking sticks and inchworms
who chases butterflies and squirrels
who's comfortable with all of life's terms
who lifts the rug of grass
and finds a whole world to explore
who stains their fingers with wild berries
who climbs trees anymore
where are the fields we walked barefoot
where are the streams we could wade in
where are the hills where we laid in the sun
where are the forests we played in
who knew life would become a checkbook
that inventions would turn us to slaves
that we'd borrow instead of creating our lives
and struggle with the debt of ourselves
that loan sharks, police, and attorneys
and hustlers of all types and sorts
would rule us with fear and deception
and because we had coupons, we bought
but God save the children untainted
by the ways and the means of our world
and bless them with a peace that frustrates us
content to be themselves
A contest entry
- Autism, Poverty and Hope by melphleg.
950 points, ended June 28, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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At first I didn't think it was going to address my friend's situation, so I was pleased in the end that it did. I think my friend will appreciate the last lines.
As a poet, I think the last lines are a bit dis jointed from the beginning. I do like the beginning for it describes children well.

