Concrete

Concrete
By: rose petal desires

Conceivably
Out of the ordinary
Norm, cracks of
Caged in dying
Roses has erased every single
Emotion that ever lived inside of me. As
The thought has time to meditate I vanish and
Evaporate.

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Concrete

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By me, right now

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Joseph Hollis
December 15, 2008

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Another nice acrostic. I've never attempted one of these. You've created some strong imagery here. I like your style.
- rose petal desires
  January 4
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  thanks maybe we will write one together one day
afroqban
November 26, 2008
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you are really good at this...comes easy yes? i cant do these at all. much love
- rose petal desires
  November 30, 2008
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  thanks
tombruize
September 15, 2008
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Nice...
You did well... Keep up the good work. Kudos!!
- rose petal desires
  September 18, 2008
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  thanks
Swangrnv
September 9, 2008
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yeah..
I like this. very well done acrostic.
- rose petal desires
  September 11, 2008
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  thanks guy
Ms Sexy
June 28, 2008
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Beautifully penned dear keep it up don't stop writing.
- rose petal desires
  July 1, 2008
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  thanks for the encouragement
Dear daijah
June 22, 2008
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i like this and i love roses
- rose petal desires
  June 22, 2008
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  Thanks you should try acrostic poetry its fun i will send you a example of one