Darkness from within
LIfe takes a spin
As my eyes bleed at the very site
What is that I see
Feeling my heart with such contempt as I plea
Wanting only to scream
Lying there as I shrivle in fear
It's out to get me
No where in sight
None of my senses working
Run, Run, as my mind clutters
And my teeth begin to chitter
I could have sworn I heard a sound
My mind frozen in terror as I walk away
It's become the darkest night of day
Suddenly blinded by a light
What is it I see?
Please allow me to plea
As I shrivle in fear
My body grows cold
My thoughts slowly becoming bold as I scream
And all hope is lost as my nightmare becomes true
Shrouded in a mist
Bleeding from the sight alone
I just wanna go home
As I close my eyes and whisper be gone
Let it be known
Back in a reality which is mine
It was simply just a nightmare
Rememering it as the dakest hour of night
A contest entry
- S.C.R.E.A.M. by infernalxfidelity.
450 points, ended July 1, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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hmmmm...this was creepy. but good. the darkness can be a very scary thing. good job.
good luck -
Excellent write here
This is penned very well I enjoyed the read . On the last stanza last line you might want to change rememering to remembering .
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Wow!
This is really really good
Gave me chills
Keep up the good work!
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