Nervous glances, feel the heat
The flame ignites as their eyes meet
No need for words or silly games
Don't need to know each others names
The flesh is all that does concern
To quench the fire inside that burns
No turning back, it's time to play
The night is hot, and so are they
Exploring hands that find their mark
Two bodies writhe within the dark
Her tastes her skin and licks her thighs
Her giggles quickly turn to sighs
With rapier tongue he flicks and twirls
She gasps and moans as her mind swirls
As juices flow, he drinks each drop
She begs for more, oh God, don't stop
So close, so close, she nears the brink
Her mind is numb, she cannot think
Her back is arched, her eyes do close
She shudders in orgasmic throes
Her screams of passion fill the air
Pleasures waves beyond compare
Forbidden love, yet feels so right
To these two strangers in the night
A contest entry
- Show me love and lust! by Lagrimas.
450 points, ended July 3, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Adult: Men Only: rhyme by piccola.
650 points, ended January 30, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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was it good for you? I hear her orgasmic throes but not much about you and yours. Nice rhyme and flow ... maybe love is better when it's forbidden and a one time thing. Who knows ...
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Heehee!
Every time I hear the word orgasm it makes me laugh.
Go ahead, call me immature
I don't care, it will forever remain funny...
Oh! Btw! Between you and me... I think you got a typo...
Her tastes her skin and licks her thighs
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Should this word be He?
So it says
HE taster HER skin and licks her thighs?
Just picked up on the fact that she either has some incredible bending abilities or you got a typo
Best of luck mate, sex is the greatest muse after all
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Good Stuff! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for your most beautifully sensual entry, Josie
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hey i loved this poem. it flows so perfectly, there was not one instance in which the poem lost its momentum. Very well written and thought out.
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Loved the rhyme here. The imagery was well done as well. Good job with this and good luck.
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OMG! This was soooo HOT! The imagery was so vivid it made me long for my man. It was sensual ans sassy but not smutty. You seem to have the ability to make rhyme out of any subject and do it so well.
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Thought I'd return the favour
Thanks for checking out my new stuff. Hope you liked it really as been though a dry patch!!
This poem is quality, very well written and extremely HOT!! Loved what you did with it and rhyme is good too.
Gonna check you out some more!!
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Diamond x
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I came to explore, read your wonderful poem on Baseball and tried to leave a comment on your wall, but alas my computer keeps shutting off, so came back to this. This is hot and very hard on a lady's heart, once I have recovered I will move on. Great and tasteful poem.
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how did this not get gold?!? great write!
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Her tastes her skin and licks her thighs
"He tastes..." ?
The best erotic poem I have read on this site bar none.
Tastefully done. All sultry and sensual. The rhyme is great and the flow is brilliant, as I am used to.
Good job, it's truly excellent.
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Instant erection... I mean attraction
Quite the piece I must say. Makes me look forward to the next time I go out, in hopes that is as interesting as this. Well written and easy to read, as well as having filling content. All around a great piece.
Thank you for entering and good luck! -
youre dope man
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Well, I was looking for a DVD, but I think I've now ended my search and found the steamiest, sultriest one right here
Really, you put such naughty and yet beautiful images on this page. Well done, poet, and good luck in the contest.
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