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Distance


so blue I still shine,
closely drawn before we part
with changing solstice.









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almost personal - I have to believe that we won't part

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  • Kelli Marie
    June 24

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    A lovely crafted haiku. You do have a capital in the first line which is a no no. You can fix that. Thank you for entering.
    Kelli