We've been together for
nearly a whole year now.
You'd think we would've
learnt to get along by now.
So many arguements,
punches and kicks.
Too many tears
and bruisers to forget.
You attack me mentally,
physically and verbally.
I can't take it anymore!
I need you erased out of my life.
Get out now, take all your stuff.
But give me back my heart,
Don't take off with it.
We tried,
Nothing seemed to work.
I took you back,
Again and again,
But never again.....
Author notes
Its all true. It actually goes beyond what I wrote. There's been knives and hospital visits involved. I'd love to write a poem about it one day once I can accept what I've been put through..
A contest entry
- Titles by piccola.
600 points, ended June 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you honestly think?
Comments
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I honestly think...
Good for you! I was in an abusive relationship that finally ended. Now I'm happily married to a man that only lays his hands on me to love me!
Best regards,
Jennifer
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I honestly think...
Good for you! I was in an abusive relationship that finally ended. Now I'm happily married to a man that only lays his hands on me to love me!
Best regards,
Jennifer
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Nothing drags a reader in like honesty. Good job.
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Sorry to remind you of the pain and hurt. Thank you for entering.
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