Come away with me, into another world,
made up of memories, all our dreams, unfurled.
Into another world, loving without fear.
All our dreams, unfurled; our hopes made clear.
Loving without fear we can find a place.
Our hopes made clear. (Gone, without a trace.)
We can find a place, disappear, together,
gone without a trace, nothing left to tether.
Disappear, together, make the world our own.
Nothing left to tether, we'll never be alone.
Make the world our own, made up of memories.
We'll never be alone. Come away with me.
Author notes
This is a bit cliched, I apologise for that .. it's my first attempt at writing a "pantoum" form poem, and I thought it rather sweet, despite the common theme.
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Comments
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I thought it a nice read...your first? nicely written. Thank you so much!
Blessed be~
Az
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Well, hardly my first poem, but it is the first I've done in this style .. that's why the theme is pretty simplistic, it's a repeating style, as you can probably tell, and those're always a bit of a challenge the first time!
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