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Blood and Bone

(song)


Sometimes I wish I
was your flesh
and your
blood and your bone
when its hot and
I'm wet
If you were mine
I'd love you forever
Until the end of the line
When its hot
and I'm wet
I wouldn't be in your debt
If you were mine
I'd love you forever
until the end of time

Sometimes I wish I was
your fantasy
I'd see you in the street
in the air, thinking of me
And I wonder how it would be
if it was just you and me
Living in eternity
Boundless blissfulness
and it's
to the blood and the bone
the soul and the stone

So sometimes I wish I
was your flesh
and your blood and bone
when its hot and
I'm wet
Souls could align
If you were mine
I'd love you
Until the end of time

And if you were
in my debt
would you still come round
to collect
If you were in my debt
would you come to complete it
Would you try to align
after all that time
Will your soul have the space
for the human race
or yourself
or your love

Sometimes I wish I
was your flesh
and your blood and bone
your teeth and your tone
your mind and your moan
when its hot and
I'm wet
I wouldn't be in your debt
If you were mine
I'd love you forever
until the end of time

Author notes

My very first love song. what do you think. Singalbe?

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Comments

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  • INTENSITY

    It was good. It has a dirty-girl appeal to it...like an evanescent feel...hope that doesn't offend. I enjoyed reading it love the thought of being someones blood and bone...stellar. ~mandie~
  • i think it's great! i like it. it reminds me of how i feel for someone right now actually.....great job!
  • Singable, yes.

    Nice repitition.


  • sonae
    June 22
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    great poem i love this

  • WHOA!

    Puts you right on the edge with this one.
    I liked it though, keep doing your thing girl!
  • Tantalizing

    This piece is very balanced, reiterating the lines "Sometimes I wish I was your flesh..." keeps me looking for more. It really puts the hardcore idea of
    merging souls out there, but also binding together "flesh and bone". Good work!

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