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Divine

star and after-star,
retinal image on-line--
completely divine

A contest entry

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  • james119
    June 25, 2008
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    nice ku


  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    This is a nice haiku. The capital in the first line is a no no however. Easily fixed. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli

  • davidwright silver member
    June 23, 2008
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    Great sentiment and an appropiate piece for the contest. Good luck and happy trails


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    Y'know, for someone who is supposed to be a haiku-nazi, I really, really like this!