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show me how beutiful the rest of the univerce is!

the anmails that r on earth make me so hapy
& i no they r part of the mistery of the univerce
they r so baeutiful & i love them so much
i rilly want god to show me how beutiful the rest of the univerce is
& show me all the ohter beutys their r in the univerce.

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  • queen Moderators member
    June 22, 2008

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    Welcome To All Poetry

    Hi dookie07

    This is a really good poem you have a few spelling errors but thats no big deal Well done
    Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • enitsirhC
    June 22, 2008

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    This is pretty good, but you didn't follow all the rules.
    You mentioned God, and I asked for no religion.

    Thank you for entering though