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The Upper Hand

a soft caress
to start things off
a loving touch of the hand
Affection from you
the one I love
that would be just grand
As time progresses
and things get hotter
We'll this is what i planned
ties and chains
a bit of free range
is that to much to demand
But don't you worry
my pretty boy
You'll know my wonderland
for when I'm done
with my little act
you'll have the upper hand

A contest entry

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  • tarcus
    July 10, 2008
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    At last someone who can read and relate poetry to that which is asked for.


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 5, 2008
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    I LIKED IT especially after hearing what you had planned!

    GOOD LUCK in the contest with it! Which fellow did you pick? I'm a naughty boy who goes both ways when me Mistress demands it as it pleases her so to watch me with other men, etc. - and if I had my choice it would be the one in the front hands down as he seems to have the bigger package! HE! HE!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.