My path in life has faded
deep within the core.
Darkness fills my chambers
with angers flaming sword.
Hate paints conviction
with every silent thought.
Wanting to wake to glory
keeping every hurt aloft.
Night fills my moments,
gashing wounds of gray.
Happy kodak memories
always seem to fade away...
Alone in wilderness valley
searching for honor from despair.
Please come and find me,
no matter the burdens I bare.
A contest entry
- Alone in the dark by shecantstopfalling..
525 points, ended July 8, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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You have presented a picture of the shadows that darkness where light goes....but I do like the way you have ended this with a ray of hope ...stretching out your hand asking for help...a great inspirational message ...we all at times need to reach out and not be afraid to ask for help. Nicely penned Sis
Good luck in this contest.
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