Universe of energies,
vibrating at different
frequencies,
everything interconnected,
chaotic static,
perfected.
Tune your mind, to the flow,
let your intentions
show.
Records written through the ages,
kept on
cosmic pages,
open book, for all who dare
seek the knowledge,
hiding there.
A contest entry
- Mysteries of the Universe by enitsirhC.
555 points, ended July 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hello.
This reads like it could also be in my contest, hahah. It is a good write, with a thread of continuity in each stanza, and you have covered a lot with very few words, with a relaxed rhyme and flow to it.
Going from vibrations of energies, to a very interesting chaotic static perfected. I like this, I interpret it as a reference to the pattern in chaos, which I read not so long ago, that the ultimate pattern is indeed chaos, a nice paradox. Then you mention intent, and open conduits for the flow, to the akashic records, with akasha meaning aether or space.
I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
My regards.
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this is rilly good
i hope u wi n the conset -
Wow!!
I really really like this poem!
The first time I read through it, I thought it was free verse. It took me until I had read it through the second time to realize it rhymes.
[ That's a very good thing, to me at least ]
I absolutely love how the rhyming feels so natural, and not forced in the least bit.
Very well written.
Good luck in my contest!
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