YOU SUCK-
you hurt me so bad, friends my ass
what do you really know about me
you don't even know you hurt me, do you
I bet you don't even FUCKING care, IMAGINE THAT!
YOU LIE-
promise to help me, save me, WHATEVER
get pissed at your own indiscressions
take it all out on me, the proverbial SCAPEGOAT
so why should I care, right?
YOU REGRET-
so do I damn it, but I don't YELL
I deal with my own, take responsibility
mabye YOU could learn something from ME
but you can't teach an old BITCH
new tricks, can you?
I'M DONE-
the love for you is gone, so is
my respect, FUCK YOU, you hurt me
and then want forgiveness? FUCK THAT!
I don't need you, not now, for to need
you means I have NO LOVE for ME
I love me, don't you wish
YOU LOVED YOU?
I'M DONE!
A contest entry
- Fire and Ice by Hata mig.
455 points, ended July 27, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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i totally relate o and thanks for the comment i didnt think it was that good ugh its just she pissed me off so much and she expected me to talk to her after she pulled that crap ..... she just wants to make me scream but i loved this poem it was incredible
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Whooo! Holy burn! That one made my temperature rise! I love it!
GREAT poem/rant! FANTASTIC!
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