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Onyx

Missing image
Mere shadows
enlighten snow foam,

My arch submerges
fronts of turmoil

to cleanse above
and below in
differing degrees

of solubility.

Author notes

15 to 30 words

Prompt is the pic., found on photobucket.com
Take it however you like. Label Correctly. Thankies.

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  • Trafalger679Curious silver member
    June 22

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    Excellent

    A very good write in relation to the pic. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Hope you have a good day.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 22

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    Loving your metaphor! A cleansing of turmoil... send that wave my way!! Awesome write.. congrats on the bronze My Sweet King!


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 22

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    This was a wodnerful take on the prompt.. The imagery and flow was just beautiful.. It was so soft to read.. Thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck.


    Angel

  • The Unknown Poet1
    June 22

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    this is quite clever with a great word to end it with! This moves with the ebb and flow of transformation very slowly frm start to finish good luck in the contest


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 22

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    ooooh such a clever metaphor here
    Enjoyed this read very much.


    Delila

  • Ennigma
    June 22
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    I like this..its like she is melting into the water!!


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 22

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    Oooh! Very nice... Such a clever take on the prompt!!! Love that ending! Excellent piece!


  • Cerulean gold member
    June 22
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    tranquil


  • PerfectImperfection
    June 22
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    Good luck

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