the boy asks
the girl smiles
instantly she knows this was ment to be
she can feel all her anxieties melting away
all her sufficating sadness is disapearing
she finaly has him
she loves him
he loves her
she has all his love
shes ready to accept it
she wouldn't give this up for the world
this is all she needs
all she wants
everything she has to live for
everything in her life becomes right
her heart is soaring
her happiness restoring
everything becomes perfect again
hes hers
she'll never let that change
hes always been there
always will be there
she feels him becoming her forever
two souls intertwine
two hearts harmonize
only to beat as one
Author notes
This poem is aout the Twilight series book New Moon. For most of this book Bellas true love is gone from her, this is torturing both of them. This is the way Bella feels when she realizes that Edward (her true love) is back and staying for good.
P.S. I know this dosn't really give the book justice but I tried my best. I LOVE Twighlight books!
Gummy bears will soon take over the world.
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Comments
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beautiful image you pain with this! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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it was wonderful. and i love twilight! but you forgot to put something in your authors notes. i will give you until the end of the contest to add it in. good luvk
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Is that better?...your probally right...for people who don't understand I needed to explain the point better.
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I think you should probably go over the spelling in this, there are several typos - including in the title
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ooooh...this is beautiful! I want to go and read those books now...(we don't have them in any of the libraries here
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Thanks for sharing this and for entering my contest,
Luck.
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a universal scenario you brought to bring the essence of love..I love this piece....well done..and thanks for sharing such a wonderful write...
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