You're my lover
My Soulmate
And my best friend
What more can I say I love you till then end
When I need a shoulder to cry on you're there
The one that can look over my shoulder with me and say You care
Anytime I'm hurt just your smile will shed such a bright light
And make everything that has gone wrong, suddenly go right
YOur my stone that holds me sturdy till the day I die
And my cliff that makes the ledge stand strong
My pedestal to hold me up when I'm feeling down
And keep me feeling so joyous whenever your around
Fate brought you to me, and I wouldn't have it any other way
You're the one who will always love me forever, and make life special every day
Everything will be alright as long as you and I can be together
And you're the lighthouse with that light go guide my lost ship at sea in the toughest weather
And like a flower our love will sprout from the seed and make roots and grow
And this you and I both understand and forever will always know
Now can you tell me what you are?
YOu're my lover, My Everything
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A contest entry
- whootness!! Options!! =D by Technicolor.
300 points, ended July 5, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like your poem. =] Please, which option did you use?
"And make everything that has gone wrong, suddenly go right" is my favorite line. Though, I find the third stanza sort of awkward to read.. -
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Line Used
IT option #2 that said the Forever Yours line and I put that line into my own words to wirte the poem because to me that was what Forever yours means reworded.
I hope I didn't mess up on the rule for that one.
I did that becuase when you said to put it into my own words I thought it meant the title too LOL.
and thanks for the comment :]
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