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[ They read the writes ]

They read the writes
Ask,"Is everything ok?"
Knowing damn well
That despair is in the air

Pour my heart out on paper
But for what, understanding?
Who am I to really care
If others understand me or not?

Bury myself in useless activities
Distracting, always distracting with work
Escape from the brutal reality
That inflicts so much pain, so unbearable

Where's the answer to this puzzle?
Obviously not lying
In the bottom of a bottle of tequila
Call the ex-wife, maybe she'll have an idea

Please tell me what you think

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    July 1, 2008

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    Well...

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    • Steven Morris
      July 1, 2008
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      wow.. that was something else. I think you probably didn't fully understand this.. but it's "poetry" so I guess it can interpreted lots of ways. You know you don't bother me and that I'll always talk to you. - Steve


  • NurseHayley
    June 29, 2008

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    I can really relate to the message behind this poem (Oh, and it's great to see you about again Hope you are otherwise well!) In fact, I could have easily written something similar if my muse hadn't vanished... and of course, yours would outshine mine anyday

    In the past I have written to express myself, but I think sometimes people believe we wish to delve deeper into whatever is published. It's sometimes frustrating...

    Take care

    Hayley x x x


  • Sock
    June 23, 2008
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    Steven,

    I'm sorry if it bothered you for me to ask if everything was alright when I read your last poem. I meant it more to let you know that I am here for you than I did actually asking. I hope everything turns out better for you, and I hope to hear from you soon.


    Kayla


    • Steven Morris
      June 23, 2008

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      It wasn't anything you did hon. I had people asking me if everything is alright ALL damn day and was just annoyed. Thanks for actually giving a damn though. That's kind of rare for me.

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