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My dear playmate

My dear playmate
my listener and adviser,
the reflection, the devisor
of my unknown state.

We both share
an endless ballet
that turns into a tango of cabaret
sometimes returning to pain that tares.

But you the resemblance
of my once suffering face,
smiles at me with such grace
that makes happy my slow dance.

My partner of steps
my guide of choreography
the color in a photography,
in a riddle the guess

With you I feel
sorrow and joy
with you i enjoy
life greatest deal.


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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    I like the softness and the muscial touch of this heart warming poetry...well done..my thanks for such a deep entry in my contest...