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Be Cautious

There are no dreams for a broken soul
that never sleeps nor are they always good
for one who peeps from trees or jeeps regardless
of how deep

  But beware that for those who have dreams
anyone of them could come true unexpectedly
with out realization in any nation regardless
of consternation of civiliation

Also be cautioous because who know exactly
what evil lurks in the hearts of people even
outside of any steeple in this unpredictable
world?

Author notes

That's what I came up with. Hope others make an attempt. I wish you good luck, in choosing a good one.
Mr. Cat

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest.
    This was such a nice piece.
    Good luck.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce