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♥ Approached with Love ♥

Drawn to your presence, flawless with perfection, is all that I see.

Into the room, I enter with awe….. true beauty before me.

 

The setting unbelievable… with windows open, the candles are burning bright.

I proceed your way, as you motion me to stay, as if for the night.

 

As I approach, our eyes are fixed, at that moment I can not resist.

Putting my hand, behind your neck, I pull you in to steal a kiss.

 

I lay you down, upon the sheets, of satin trimmed… love & lace.

As we undress, our bodies naked, we then begin to slowly embrace.

 

Caressing your skin, I kiss your neck…and begin to nibble at your ear.

My hands are wondering, your body yearning…the feeling is crystal clear.

 

No longer can I contain….I pull together our bodies to keep.

The feeling so strong…power with passion, my thrust is deep.

 

With a silent moan, you long for more…. I can not say no.

As I hold you to me, I give within you… what makes me whole.

 

True passion, true heart, true love to see.

Now within you, my love is whole, forever to be.

 

M Curtis

 

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  • sense surreal gold member
    September 11, 2008
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    a passionate flow...that feeds the readers id and ego.


  • ennovy silver member
    June 22, 2008
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    Nice heated mood, sexy and lustful....thanks for enteringnovy & Brazos


  • Galaxy2
    June 22, 2008

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    A nautral outcome....when two peolpe meet...with all their passions of love and lust...
    the poem moves smoothly
    galaxy2


  • Brazos silver member
    June 22, 2008

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    Very passionate, very descriptive, I could easily see someone being put "in the mood" upon reading this. Nicely formed and worded, as well.

    Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
    Novy & Brazos