When the tears fall
They carry a heavy weight with them
One that without being shared
Can bring more from others who hold that heart close
It is times like that
That you realise just how important time is
Time to share and time to love unconditionally
With every beat you offer the compassion that is yearned for
What kind of lover could you ever be?
If you never felt that weight
Never stood and gave all to lift that sorrowed spirit
And surrendered to the need to feel loved
When all the chips are down
It is then that you need to step up to the mark
Lay your emotions bare for them to see
And give all that is required to allow an easy rest
Bring dreams of hope and fulfilment
Create a desire to hold on for all that is of worth
Distance will bring the emptiness to harbour
And stow away the feelings of loneliness
Always remember that what you feel
They feel
And if you truly hold their heart
They will know it.
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sometimes even the sweetest of hearts needs caressed longer to ease away the doubt.
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'Bring dreams of hope and fulfilment
Create a desire to hold on for all that is of worth
Distance will bring the emptiness to harbour'
Hope filled with dreams. A wishful thought to one you hold dear, that can bare her soul...only to be free fo the burdens of life! ~Sie
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ah i got stuck on time - igt does not mean that much to me - and gave all to lift that sorrowed spirit
- i don't know about lover but it is not all abut love, that could be the same as saying what kind of person are you. -
Mike I live your words everyday. What more can I say. Your poem has brought me to tears. I give and give for so long now but don't get back the love I give so freely to the one on my heart. Sometimes we fall in love with the wrong person and we accept less then what we are worthy of just to be with them. So sad but true for many. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. You really do understand what love and friendships are all about.
Bless You,
Sandy 
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Thank You Sandy,
The beauty is in the feelings. I,m at work and will speak with you tonight when I get home.
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BREATH TAKING
Your words have reached in and softly caressed my heart.
To feel the love, passion and need, is to find the rest with in that love, so that loneliness can mend.
Within a moment of Silence a sweet thought is stirred, two hearts yet one beat*love*and if you truly holf their heartThey will know it...As I have felt yours!
Nemehotatse my Hetane*love*
Niaish for always being my smile and holding my heart so tenderly*love*
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Wow this is really beautiful. I like what you said about unconditional love. I am still in search of it. I can give it but I don't receive it back.
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It is out there Sis, someone somewhere is holding on to all those gives, and you will be rewarded in the fashion and desire that you truly deserve to receive in the return.
Your heart is pure Sis, and the filter is doing it's job by finding what you search for. keep smiling and stay safe
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"If you truly hold their heart, they will know it."
This settles on me like a sweet rain in the desert. Thank you, Mike. Somehow, whenever I have felt sorrow, if I open my heart, the truth pours in to heal it, even if I'm silent in the asking.
How great the "desire is to hold on for all that is of worth," and and know one is not alone, whether it be love from a loved one, or feeling the tender presence of a higher power.
I see your heart... here.
Karen
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Sweet Karen.....
You know, it is in the holding of a heart so dear, that brings the joys of life to the fore. Now whether it be that of a friend, a relative or a lover, it all means the same. When time disables the motions or words for whatever reason, the emotions are still held within.
But when time allows, all those words and motions come flooding back, it's in the patience within ones own heart that really matters, and thats when you realise that holding on was more than worth the wait.
Fine weather, stormy or fair, if you can walk throught the thunder and rain then you will be rewarded in the warmth of the cuddle that awaits you and the healing will be felt.
keep smiling Karen
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beautifully said mikeyness
you carry across much truth in this one
lovely
Tasha
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Thanks Tash,
You found the essence within too I hope.
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