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Crying

Eyes are flooded to the top
oh the downpour never stops

And I curl up on my couch
Liner running down my face

Question myself, question my ways
And looking out, for the people on the outside

Can you look into my eyes
(Drowned in mercy)
I melt inside your skin
(Give me back me)

Rain... the tonic falling down
Rain ...on the mountains all around
Rain... my heart just wants to shout
Rain ...but it whispers... my name





Author notes

not my best by far but i think i could get something out of it

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