binary star appears
twin lights bedeck northern sky -
time's hiccup now and now
Author notes
picture prompt: two(?) identical stars, one a bit closer thsn the other.
A contest entry
- Haiku III by Kelli Marie.
2250 points, ended June 27, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please give honest critique (constructive please :))
Comments
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I like this...I was wondering if you meant time or the "time's" that you have. Very nice. Thank you for entering.
Kelli -
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I meant something akin to 'time warp' and it's apparent resulting singularity, thus making it both.
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