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Come Unto Jesus

The earth is a thunderstorm of evil,

there is much murder and hate,

lightning strikes a passive doom

and only God knows our fate.

 

Jesus sees what's on the earth,

a feeling of peace hardly shows,

some people walk lovingly in His light

while for others a dark wind blows.

 

Bitter darkness fills a fallen heart,

Jesus' tears fall towards the earth,

He cries down rains of sorrow for those

that need to enter into a spiritual birth.

 

Jesus watches with arms wide open,

He waits for those to accept His love,

He wants those people to come unto Him

and accept eternal life from above.

 

For Jesus is the light of the world,

He wants all to return some day,

to be with God and Jesus Christ

we must open our hearts and pray.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • islekine gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    Beautifully done!

    A wonderfully penned piece! Best wishes in the contest.
    Write on!


  • Talking Toni gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    Lovely Rhyme.....

    You tied the picture in nicely with this lovely rhyme..Your words ring truth and we need to get on fire for Jesus!!! Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in my contest!!!~~Toni~~