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darkness

darkness is were i live
all alone.
when someone trys to bring me into the light
all i can do is groan.

i know to much pain
to return to the life i once lived.
its gotten so bad that i had to chain
the doors to the outside world shut.

i love the numb felling
i get when i lock myself inside.
I'm tired of retelling
the same old story again and again.

sometimes i never want to leave
because i know I'm safe in here.
but i need to believe
that somehow i can forgive him.

but until that day
sometime soon,
ill just say
"please, let me deal with my problems on my own"

this poem is a big clue to a huge problem in my life. hope u like it.

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  • WeLiveWeDie
    June 22, 2008
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    Emotional...

    Sometimes thats the best way to solve your problems is by
    yourself. But if you stray to far away then you are beyond the help of others and you might need someone one
    day. So do the best you can all alone but never be afraid to reach out, because if you stay in the dark to long,
    when you do want the light you'll be blind...
    Good poem ...