She’s a siren, she’s a succubus
She’s Aphrodite in disguise
Her song will ensnare you
Her lust will rip and tear you
Because you’re just another guy
She’ll cut your chest right open
And consume your beating heart
The blood stains red her lips
She drinks it down in sips
And this murder’s just the start
You’re bartering with your life
She now owns your helpless soul
Your hands are tied and bound
She has you gagged, can’t make a sound
And you’re in her complete control
She’s the one who steals their hearts
And sucks the marrow from their bones
To her you’re just a play thing
She’ll make you out to be a king
Then she’ll set fire to the throne
Author notes
She's a dashing, daring devil
A contest entry
- Angel or Devil by Riftkin.
475 points, ended June 22, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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This is a really cool poem. I loved the imagery. She sounds like a real devil. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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great take on the prompt you did a great job. Riftkin
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