As you envelope me in your arms,
My body betraying my every desire.
You take me, make me yours
To heights I have never reached.
Now within my grasp
As that magic moment is met.
The skies burst open and shed
Many sorrowful tears from Heaven .
In my afterglow I look upon
That which took my innocence so deep.
To my horror it is not a lover but a demon
With all her wiles she did possess me.
She made me hers, my cries ring out
Evil eyes and sardonic smile.
My wings are slowly ripped from me
And pain now shows the blood of Hell
Author notes
Number 4 - lust
A contest entry
- The Seven Deadly Sins Contest by Ethereal One.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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excellent expression
Your words create some very strong images, and emotions for the reader. The mood is very dark, and it does make one think about the possibilities.
Thank you for your entry, and best of luck to you.
Ethereal One
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Thank you very much for your kind comments Ethereal.
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