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Second Star to the Right

Straight on till morning
The second star to the right
Neverland is there

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yeah, i thought it was a cool idea....but thats for you to decide

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 24, 2008
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    lol i am on my way


  • Kelli Marie
    June 24, 2008

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    Ah, a very cool idea. Since all lines are capitalized it is okay to have capitalization. Well crafted. Thank you for entering.
    Kelli

  • davidwright silver member
    June 21, 2008
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    I like this it has soul. Good luck in the contest and happy trails