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penman

Conceived as soul immersed in Heaven's luminescent womb,

but never free the stain from lure of forbidden shadows,

quill, trembling from infusions of ethereal incandescent,

writes the silvery stanzas, obediently,

shackled dutifully to ink well of numinous transcendence.

 

Exhaling the nights that mar with darkest doubts,

unable to restraint the fire

burning uncontrollably inside from an eternal torch,

glowing forth in verse images of starburst signets in karmic sight,

taunting to the core with a glimmer of divine radiance.

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  • Whoochi gold member
    June 22, 2008

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    Outstanding, this could work for any poet...love this feel "writes the silvery stanzas, obediently,

    shackled dutifully to ink well of numinous transcendence."
    absolutely slaves to the ink...and the doubts that come..Surely after this insightful, real, genuine write you should throw away the doubts...Excellent...Best of Luck!

  • Virginia Logsdon
    June 21, 2008
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    Beautiful, Penman!

    This is so lovely and it seems to light up the page.


  • duana
    June 21, 2008
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    wow you squeezed the depression out of that amazing uplifting cool phrase, lol


  • Lady Australis silver member
    June 21, 2008
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    i love you


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 21, 2008
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    A great title!




    Awesome as always sir


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    June 21, 2008

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    wow. as always, you never cease to amaze me. well done on this. oh and happy birthday (if i'm late or early i do apologize)

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